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How to Write an Internal Email

By: Jeff Durham - Updated: 10 Jul 2017 | comments*Discuss
Writing An Internal E-mail How To Write

Whilst it’s perfectly acceptable for internal e-mails to be less formal than those which you’re sending to external clients or customers it’s still important to remember that all business e-mails should still be treated seriously. Information should be conveyed in a clear and concise manner and it’s also important to note that many companies will still keep every single e-mail which every employee has sent or received on an internal company mail server, even if you’ve deleted them from your own mailbox. This means that you need to take care of the way you write your internal e-mails and carefully consider what you’re saying.

Golden Rules of Internal E-mail

Firstly, don’t write anything that you wouldn’t want anybody within the company to read. Don’t criticise a boss or fellow employee unless you’d be happy for the person whom you’re criticising to see that e-mail too, as they just might. People have had disciplinary action taken against them as a result of bad-mouthing their boss or supervisor to a colleague within an e-mail. Similarly, unjust criticism or comments that challenges somebody else’s integrity, competence or honesty can, if discovered and traced back to you, result in libel action against you.

Clear and Concise Information

Whilst it’s not strictly necessary to use formal language such as ‘Yours sincerely’ in an internal e-mail, make sure that the information you’re conveying is still as precise and clear as it would be if you were talking face to face. For example, if you’re arranging a meeting, make sure the time, date and location are clearly indicated on the e-mail. You’ll be only too aware of the vast amount of e-mails that come into your inbox each day so you can be certain that your colleagues, and especially your boss, will get just as many and, perhaps, even more, so keep the e-mails short and to the point and put an appropriate subject title. That way, your colleague will know whether they need to look at it straight away or whether it can wait until later.

Send and Response

Clearly understand that although your e-mail will be received within a second or two of sending it, that you should not be expecting an immediate response. It’s important that, as a communication tool, e-mail is one of the most important tools at our disposal these days, giving us the opportunity to send a message to people all over the world in an instant. However, no matter that you’ll always respond to e-mail the second it lands in your inbox, not all people are the same and colleagues may be out of the office or simply busy when you send them an e-mail and you should not get annoyed if you don’t get a response straight away. If you prefer, in response to an e-mail that needs a reply, you can always get back to the person in a brief message and tell them you’ve received it and that you’re a bit busy but will get back to them later.

E-mail and Emotions

When writing an e-mail, it will not always allow you to get your message across in the way it was intended as a face to face conversation or a phone call can do. It cannot, for example, convey the same message as if you were speaking it as a hand gesture, facial expression or the tone of your voice might do. Therefore, if you need to express urgency, you should always send the e-mail as ‘high priority’ but be careful about overdoing that. Some people will only look at high priority e-mails on the same day and will come back to the rest later on in the week, so if you’re constantly making all of your messages high priority so that they get looked at quickly and you’re just writing to ask a colleague what they got up to over the weekend, you could very well end up annoying people or, worse still, they may just start ignoring your e-mails. Also, be very careful if you are angered or upset by an e-mail. In fact, it’s good practice to always leave an e-mail you receive a good half-hour at least before you respond to it if it’s of a serious nature or it’s something that’s upset or annoyed you. An ‘angry’ written response can often come across far worse to the recipient than you might have intended. And, a hasty reply to a complex issue might indicate to the sender that you haven’t really given their message that much thought.

Good E-mail Housekeeping

If you receive lots of e-mails a day from colleagues that are relevant, set up individual folders in your inbox to file them, e.g. meeting mails, mails to reply to later, company information, latest updates etc., so that you can refer to individual e-mails quickly, if you need to. Make sure you delete your mailbox regularly to avoid unnecessary storage of out of date e-mails that are no longer relevant.

The Use Of ‘cc’ and ‘bcc’

If you need to send an e-mail to several people simultaneously, only copy in (cc) those who really need to see the e-mail. If it doesn’t pertain to them directly, don’t cc them in just for the sake of it. It’s useful, however, to ‘blind copy’ bcc yourself in to any e-mails you might send or keep a record of them in your ‘sent items’ box. That way, if there has been any misunderstanding or you’re questioned about whether you’ve sent an e-mail or not or at the time said you sent it, you’ll have kept a record of it to refer to.

Attachments and Jokes

Firstly, not all people like to receive joke e-mails, especially those with attachments. You are in a place of work after all and on company time so you should avoid these at all costs, unless your boss is a joker and sender himself. Attachments are one of the main sources of computer viruses and Trojans so never open an attachment unless you’re 100% sure that the person who’s sent it to you is not going to send you a virus. Even then, spammers have sophisticated methods these days so, wherever possible, don’t open an attachment unless there’s some text in the body of the e-mail of another employee who has specified what the attachment contains and that it’s safe. And, if you’re the sender, try not to use attachments unless absolutely necessary and then follow the same guidelines so that your recipient knows it is safe to open the attachment. And, if you suspect a phishing e-mail or dodgy attachment has arrived in your inbox, don’t open it but simply forward the entire e-mail to your IT support team.

E-mails are part and parcel of everyday life these days but, although they can save us time, they can also take up far more of our time than it can save, so don’t just blast internal e-mails around indiscriminately and don’t send any non-important mail to colleagues sitting across the desk from you. Sometimes, an old fashioned brief conversation can even be quicker than electronic communication.

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An internal email? Is that a special type of email? I don't get it.
Kush Lover - 17-Jul-13 @ 5:39 AM
If you’re going to send jokes, and let’s face it, we all do, then send them only to the people who you know will appreciate them and mark them that way so they don’t become caught up with other mail. Also, be cautious on what you send, and never anything too personal through a work email account – there’s always the risk it can go viral.
William - 13-Sep-12 @ 6:59 PM
Err on the side of caution and keep your emails professional. Always use proper English, never text speak, and keep the mail as brief as possible without being curt; remember, most people will receive hundreds of work mails every day and so they don't have the time to read long screeds. Think of it as a series of bullet points that can be explained in full if needed.
James - 7-Jun-12 @ 2:22 PM
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